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Rush looks over the tape transcript and thinks that Lori and Karen were going to meet with the insider. Ava Willis obtains all the tapes Angie has of Lori. Angie finds a tape from the day before Lori died. They watch it and see the interview of the insider talking about how the company knew the unsanitary conditions at the Mississinewa Cola and Brewery formerly spiked their colas and beer in the 1980s, but they covered it up.
 
Rush looks over the tape transcript and thinks that Lori and Karen were going to meet with the insider. Ava Willis obtains all the tapes Angie has of Lori. Angie finds a tape from the day before Lori died. They watch it and see the interview of the insider talking about how the company knew the unsanitary conditions at the Mississinewa Cola and Brewery formerly spiked their colas and beer in the 1980s, but they covered it up.
  
Ava Willis and Lilly Rush think Lou may have wanted to kill Lori to protect the company’s image. Jana Miller and Jill Tucker meet with Lou O'Brien again. He insists that he only talked to Lori about fundraisers. Willis then pulls out his phone records and says he called Lori the night before she died. Rush says that the company flushed out all the people who opened their mouths about the dirty 1980s cover up. Lou says that they don’t know what they are talking about. Miller then plays the tape of the secret informer. Tucker asks again why he called Lori the night before she died. The detectives wonder why he wanted her to silence the story. O'Brien says he didn’t kill her. He says he thought he could talk her out of doing the story.
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Ava Willis and Lilly Rush think Martin Watts may have wanted to kill Lori to protect the company’s image. Jana Miller and Jill Tucker meet with Lou O'Brien again. He insists that he only talked to Lori about fundraisers. Willis then pulls out his phone records and says he called Lori the night before she died. Rush says that the company flushed out all the people who opened their mouths about the dirty 1980s cover up. Lou says that they don’t know what they are talking about. Miller then plays the tape of the secret informer. Tucker asks again why he called Lori the night before she died. The detectives wonder why he wanted her to silence the story. O'Brien says he didn’t kill her. He says he thought he could talk her out of doing the story.
  
He flashes back to meeting with Lori and asking what the corporation was going to do to them when they found out that they were the ones who exposed them. Lori told him to think about all the people he was saving. Lou tells the detectives that he told his boss about the interview he gave with Lori. Lou says that he thought he was going to be fired, but he was promoted instead. Lou says he told his boss, David Andrews, so that he would fix the problem of people getting sick. Jeffries and Hunter meet with David Andrews and tell him that they think he was a conspirator
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He flashes back to meeting with Lori and asking what the corporation was going to do to them when they found out that they were the ones who exposed them. Lori told him to think about all the people he was saving. Martin tells the detectives that he told his boss about the interview he gave with Lori. Martin says that he thought he was going to be fired, but he was promoted instead. Martin says he told his boss, David Andrews, so that he would fix the problem of people getting sick. Jeffries and Hunter meet with David Andrews and tell him that they think he was a conspirator
 
to Lori’s murder. He tells the detectives that he was in London when Lori was murdered. The detectives say they know, but they also know he called someone at WIBC the night she was killed. Jeffries says that if he tells them who he called, they will drop the conspiracy charges.
 
to Lori’s murder. He tells the detectives that he was in London when Lori was murdered. The detectives say they know, but they also know he called someone at WIBC the night she was killed. Jeffries says that if he tells them who he called, they will drop the conspiracy charges.
  
Brad Hunter brings Mike Ahern back into the station and asks if he is friends with David Andrews. Karen says no. Brad asks why David called him a few hours before Lori was killed. Mike says that she probably just had a story she wanted covered. Brad asks Mike about the stock he owned in Mississinewa Cola and Brewery that he sold just before it changed ownership in 2011. Mike says that he had a good broker. Brad says that Andrews called him to make Lori’s story go away. Mike says that the story should have gone away. Brad Hunter asks Mike how he knew about the interview Lori had
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Rush brings Karen Hensel Sr. back into the station and asks if she is friends with David Andrews. Karen says no. Rush asks why David called her a few hours before Lori was killed. Karen says that she probably just had a story she wanted covered. Rush asks Karen about the stock she owned in Mississinewa Cola and Brewery that she sold just before it changed ownership in 2011. Karen says that she had a good broker. Rush says that Andrews called her to make Lori’s story go away. Karen says that the story should have gone away. Rush asks Karen how she knew about the interview Lori had
with Lou O'Brien. He asks if Andrews told him or if he learned about it from Lori. Brad Hunter then gets Mike to admit that he wanted to get the tape of the interview back from Lori.
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with Martin Watts. She asks if Andrews told her or if she learned about it from Lori. Rush then gets Karen to admit that she wanted to get the tape of the interview back from Lori.
  
Mike flashes back to meeting Lori at the park. She told him about the story she had about Mississinewa Cola and Brewery. He told her that he was proud she cracked the story, then asked for the tape. She told him it was in a safe place (it was with Angie) and he asked for it for legal reasons. Lori refused to hand it over and threatened to go to another station. Lori then asked for $5 million for the tape and Mike agreed. Lori then tried to run, but he fought her. He then strangled her to death and ran off. Mike Ahern is then arrested. Meanwhile, in a deleted scene, Mrs. Dubinski watches the local news story exposing the unsanitary cover up from 30 years before.
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Karen flashes back to meeting Lori at the park. She told her about the story she had about Mississinewa Cola and Brewery. She told her that she was proud she cracked the story, then asked for the tape. She told her it was in a safe place and she asked for it for legal reasons. Lori refused to hand it over and threatened to go to another station. Lori then asked for $1 million for the tape and Karen agreed. Lori then tried to run, but she fought her. She then shot her to death and ran off. Karen Hensel Sr. is then arrested. Meanwhile, Mrs. Dubinski watches the local news
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story exposing the unsanitary cover up .
  
 
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