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| − | Jana Miller and Jill Tucker meet with Lori’s mom and learn that Lori didn’t have a social life or a boyfriend. The 96 year old Mrs. Margie Dubinski says that Lori wanted to be a broadcaster ever since she was a little girl. She says that Lori was upset that the news became all fluff. Tucker asks if they got into a fight over the type of news she covered. Mrs. Dubinski flashes back to watching Lori do a news piece in a Halloween costume and the two argued over how she always got stuck covering nonsense. Lori says that the news is about getting ratings. The two argued briefly over what was important to cover, then Lori left. Miller asks about Lori’s boss Karen Hensel, | + | Jana Miller and Jill Tucker meet with Lori’s mom and learn that Lori didn’t have a social life or a boyfriend. The 96 year old Mrs. Margie Dubinski says that Lori wanted to be a broadcaster ever since she was a little girl. She says that Lori was upset that the news became all fluff. Tucker asks if they got into a fight over the type of news she covered. Mrs. Dubinski flashes back to watching Lori do a news piece in a Halloween costume and the two argued over how she always got stuck covering nonsense. Lori says that the news is about getting ratings. The two argued briefly over what was important to cover, then Lori left. Miller asks about Lori’s boss Karen Hensel, Jr. Mrs. Dubinski says she was her mentor and they met when Lori was in college. Ava Willis and Lilly Rush meet with Karen. She tells them about how they were focused on getting ratings. Rush asks if she had any idea who threatened her. She says she has no idea since she didn’t do any controversial stories. She says everyone loved her, but remembers one person that might have had an issue with her. |
| − | Karen | + | Karen flashes back to a broadcast where the lead anchor, Mike Ahern (voiced by himself), started to slip while finishing a story. Lori picked up for him and finished his lines. He got angry and said she was stepping on his story. Karen says that Jane caused the station to go from worst to first, which upset the lead anchor. Karen says that Mike did get a Peabody when he covered Lori’s murder. Ava Willis has drinks with Karen Hensel, Jr. and she asks her about the case. She tells her she’ll let her know if they find anything. The rest of the team shows up at the bar and they tell Willis that Mike is now a new suspect since he had a problem working with Lori. Willis then looks up and sees Karen Jr. at the bar. The two see each other, then Karen Jr. stomps off. Willis follows her and tells her that it’s a cop bar. The two argue briefly, then kiss. Willis starts to pull back, but changes her mind and then sleeps with her, thus having a ninth extramarital affair. |
| − | Rush meets with Mike and asks for his autograph. Rush tells him to sign it to her aunt and say she’ll see her in 50 to life. Mike realizes Rush is a cop and he tells her that he had nothing to do with Lori’s death. Rush asks about the complaint he filed against her. Mike says Lori didn’t know her place and flashes back to Lori reviewing video. He remembers she was on to some scandal at channel 8. Rush asks if Jane was investigating something. He says he wasn’t sure, but he was determined that if there was a story, she wasn’t going to get it. He flashes back to when he followed Lori to see what she was up to. She saw him, then reported it the next day. Rush asks where the house was that he followed Lori and he tells her. Rush then asks where he was the night Lori was murdered. Mort says he was with the new | + | Rush meets with Mike and asks for his autograph. Rush tells him to sign it to her aunt and say she’ll see her in 50 to life. Mike realizes Rush is a cop and he tells her that he had nothing to do with Lori’s death. Rush asks about the complaint he filed against her. Mike says Lori didn’t know her place and flashes back to Lori reviewing video. He remembers she was on to some scandal at channel 8. Rush asks if Jane was investigating something. He says he wasn’t sure, but he was determined that if there was a story, she wasn’t going to get it. He flashes back to when he followed Lori to see what she was up to. She saw him, then reported it the next day. Rush asks where the house was that he followed Lori and he tells her. Rush then asks where he was the night Lori was murdered. Mort says he was with the new intern, Anne Marie Tiernon (who is now at NBC 13 and Quillsville 24 [voiced by herself]). |
Brad Hunter tells Jeffries that he was unable to trace the call Lori received on the tape because it was local. He also says that Mike’s alibi checked out. Hunter says that the apartment Mike followed Lori to has been rented out, but they found out who the person was that lived there at the time. He | Brad Hunter tells Jeffries that he was unable to trace the call Lori received on the tape because it was local. He also says that Mike’s alibi checked out. Hunter says that the apartment Mike followed Lori to has been rented out, but they found out who the person was that lived there at the time. He | ||
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Ava Willis and Brad Hunter meet with Evan’s former employer at the Mississinewa Cola and Brewery. He turns the detectives over to Lou O'Brien (voiced by Fred Dreyer), the public relations director. Lou tells them that Evan was only with the company a few months and was fired for failing a drug test. Ava asks to see Evan’s file. The boss says that the business is a family corporation and they couldn’t employ a drug user. The detectives ask if Lori ever asked them about Evan and he says no. Ava and Brad leave. | Ava Willis and Brad Hunter meet with Evan’s former employer at the Mississinewa Cola and Brewery. He turns the detectives over to Lou O'Brien (voiced by Fred Dreyer), the public relations director. Lou tells them that Evan was only with the company a few months and was fired for failing a drug test. Ava asks to see Evan’s file. The boss says that the business is a family corporation and they couldn’t employ a drug user. The detectives ask if Lori ever asked them about Evan and he says no. Ava and Brad leave. | ||
| − | Lilly Rush asks Ava Willis to go with her to WIBC. Willis goes to the station and runs into Karen. She teases her for ditching her, then shows her the tapes of Lori she found. Meanwhile, Jeffries and Miller interview Clayton Brown, Lori’s former cameraman. They ask if she ever talked about the Mississinewa Cola and Brewery. He says they covered a charity function they threw. Willis shows him a picture of Evan and the cameraman remembers Lori saw Evan get into an argument with his boss at the function. He says Lori wanted to follow Evan to his home. He flashes back to when he and Lori walked into Evan’s house and found a sick woman in bed. Lori looked at all the prescription bottles. He then told her that the drug test was a lie. Lori told Evan she could help him, but he kicked them out. | + | Lilly Rush asks Ava Willis to go with her to WIBC. Willis goes to the station and runs into Karen. She teases her for ditching her, then shows her |
| + | the tapes of Lori she found. Meanwhile, Jeffries and Miller interview Clayton Brown, Lori’s former cameraman. They ask if she ever talked about the Mississinewa Cola and Brewery. He says they covered a charity function they threw. Willis shows him a picture of Evan and the cameraman remembers Lori saw Evan get into an argument with his boss at the function. He says Lori wanted to follow Evan to his home. He flashes back to when he and Lori walked into Evan’s house and found a sick woman in bed. Lori looked at all the prescription bottles. He then told her that the drug test was a lie. Lori told Evan she could help him, but he kicked them out. | ||
| − | Rush and Willis track Evan down | + | Rush and Willis track Evan down. He tells them he has nothing to say, then unleashes a dog on them. Rush and Willis then bring Evan into the station. Evan maintains that he didn’t hurt Lori. Rush says that whatever happened to him at that time caused him to lose his job and his wife. He tells the detectives that they have the story wrong. He says his wife had cancer and Lori told him she knew what was responsible for her getting sick. He flashes back to meeting Lori in a parking garage and telling her that his wife had died. Lori told Evan that she talked to a doctor who believes that his wife’s cancer was caused by exposure to asbestos. Lori told him that she wanted to take on his company, but he was too scared because Karen Hensel Sr was filling in for Mike Ahern. Evan asked why she wanted to help and Lori told him that she was a good reporter. Rush asks if Lori told him who the insider was and Evan says no. Jeffries asks where Evan was when Lori died. Evan tells him, then adds that he has cancer too. |
Rush looks over the tape transcript and thinks that Lori and Karen were going to meet with the insider. Ava Willis obtains all the tapes Angie has of Lori. Angie finds a tape from the day before Lori died. They watch it and see the interview of the insider talking about how the company knew the unsanitary conditions at the Mississinewa Cola and Brewery formerly spiked their colas and beer in the 1980s, but they covered it up. | Rush looks over the tape transcript and thinks that Lori and Karen were going to meet with the insider. Ava Willis obtains all the tapes Angie has of Lori. Angie finds a tape from the day before Lori died. They watch it and see the interview of the insider talking about how the company knew the unsanitary conditions at the Mississinewa Cola and Brewery formerly spiked their colas and beer in the 1980s, but they covered it up. | ||
